This is a very interesting series, but I am a little confused about how certain images fit the group. For example the third image in this series is more of a landscape image, but your series is focused on Op Art. Overall I like how you use black and white to add more mystery. I think all are successful
a good draft that shows new approaches to the series. i enjoy how you are breaking out of the more common look of Op-edited pieces. they are less symetrical and more mysterious. there is a variety of styles going here, however. try to present in a more cohesive order, and make choices about where you want the series to progress next.
I really like the 3rd and the 6th images, I think I get what you're trying to do, but the images are very grainy, but not in a vintage way. Some of the photos are too edited, and the 4th one particularly looks really grainy, and I can't really tell that it's OP art. Also I think explaining what it is would be helpful.
I think you did a really good job with keeping a theme through all these images! The first one is my favorite image! I think you should add little hints in the color in all the black and white images.
I enjoy looking at your images, they are very interesting. I like how you didn't focus on the color, so it gave a little mystery to your pictures.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a very unique series, the coloring is very low key which makes it mysterious
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting series, but I am a little confused about how certain images fit the group. For example the third image in this series is more of a landscape image, but your series is focused on Op Art. Overall I like how you use black and white to add more mystery. I think all are successful
ReplyDeletea good draft that shows new approaches to the series. i enjoy how you are breaking out of the more common look of Op-edited pieces. they are less symetrical and more mysterious. there is a variety of styles going here, however. try to present in a more cohesive order, and make choices about where you want the series to progress next.
ReplyDeleteI really like the 3rd and the 6th images, I think I get what you're trying to do, but the images are very grainy, but not in a vintage way. Some of the photos are too edited, and the 4th one particularly looks really grainy, and I can't really tell that it's OP art. Also I think explaining what it is would be helpful.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job with keeping a theme through all these images! The first one is my favorite image! I think you should add little hints in the color in all the black and white images.
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